Valentine's Day Poetry Competition: 2009 Entries
We really enjoyed reading the valentines poem entries into the 2009 poetry competition. We had a massive 47 poems that got published on our website this year. After 10 days of voting from the public and several days deliberating at Tree2mydoor, Creative Chamber and JamPR, we are pleased to announce the winner of the Tree2mydoor Valentines Poetry Competition 2009 is...
Claire-Janine Munn
PS Many thanks to the judges at Creative Chamber and JamPR who gave their time to deliberate over the entries!
The winning entry
A Dreadful Love Poem for Andre (Blame the Vogons)
Be my Homer I wanna be your Marge. If I'm your Norfolk Broads Will you be my barge? Let's please be Tom and Barbara, I will show you the good life. Even though we'll never marry, I would love to be your wife. I've the passion Lily Munster has for her dear Herman. I would love you if you were ginger I would love you if you were German. Like Mr and Mrs Huxtable we'd smooch even when we're wrinkley. I'll even consider ironing your shirts, but I hope you like them crinkley. Like Mr and Mrs Incredible I'm flexible and you're tough. But if you promise to be my true love That will always be enough. Like Bonny and Clyde without all the dying, Like Gwyneth and that Coldplay guy without all the crying, My partner in crime, the love of my life, my muse, my joy, my fun. please be my one and only, cos you've always been 'the one'.
Claire-Janine Munn, 36
Entries for our 2009 Poetry Competition
Ode to ?
Your beauty is so alluring your style is one of grace your mind is pure and gentle untroubled by the human race. Your freckles are cute and endearing your hair is one with fashion your sleek loose curls most appealing whilst your body exudes such attraction. Your eyes, how much they smoulder your nose and lips by design a kiss from those lips would be so divine, so divine I hope that pleasure will one day be mine.
Jeff Sims
You
It could have been the handsome man Who bought me gifts and flowers Or the funny chap who dressed all wrong And made me laugh for hours It could have been the shy one Whose heart was buried deep But you gave me all that and more And you are mine to keep
Amanda McCormack, 47
The smell of your hair, A touch from your hand. The sparkle in your eyes. Your grace, Your wit, Your affection. I desire you. All of you. I want to drink you up, Carress you. Take you in my arms, Make love to you. My love, My heart, My valentine.
Susannah Leggatt
Our story
I went along in my hectic life Thinking I'd never be someones wife Relationships were a short term thing I loved the excitement of a fling Permanently single I thought I would be There was no soulmate out there for me Flatmates we were and best friends we became Our personalities so matched we were one and the same But as friends we stayed so as not to destroy This rare connection between girl and boy As other people saw the affinity we had They knew before us, to deny it was mad But still we denied it maybe through fear Now we'd found this friendship so dear Maybe it wouldnt work and we would ruin it all Why change things when were having such a ball? Then one day we could hide it no longer Our friendship had grown into something stronger All our fears weren't enough anymore My friend had turned into the man I adore Everything we were looking for but never thought we'd find How could we have ever been so blind Now 4 years down the line and our love great as ever Our friendship stands strong and will do forever Nothing could break us its me and you till the end Youre my love, my life and always my very best friend.
Sajdha Bashir
To my Valentine - She knows who she is
Let mountain ranges rise and fall, Let oceans drain, rainforests die, No force of nature , nor of time Can turn the truth into a lie. When ice-sheets crack and glaciers melt, And tempests rage , or deserts grow, My love for you will yet survive, Still will my heart sing, words you know. No rupture in the world's true course, No cataclysm of heat or cold, Can shift the axis where I turn, Or make a fresh new love seem old,. You are my sun and moon and stars, There is no thing exists above you. The very universe may end, Yet still, eternally, I love you.
Michael Deparis
If the stars were to fall from darkened skies and tears like rainbursts fell from my eyes all that i needed to vanquish the pain would be your love and mine together again. For the world it spins fast but it cannnot compete with my heart beating so furious whenever we meet. Venus looks down with a jealous eye for she never did find the right guy, So my girl let us live a full life and enjoy what we can and avoid any strife, with you by my side we will live every day through hell or high water we will see the sun's ray.
Bob McConell
He was Elder than she And Orange'd to propose at the Beech. 'Willow Marry me'? he asked, 'or I'll Pine in Privet for ever. 'Do Yew love me?' he asked, 'Willow promise to oBay?' He was Spruced up, his Chestnut Broad and strong. He held out a small Box, taking out A ring and placing it on her finger. 'Lemon hold your hand', he Pined. 'Don't say no, or I’ll be Sycamore'.
Frances Heaton
I dedicate this to my daughter April
We've had our struggles, our ups and downs And have battled through our fears But we've stuck together, side by side Despite our many tears You've given meaning to my life I will love you eternally You fill my heart with happiness You are the world to me. Times have been hard, as a single mum But it all has been worthwhile The joy you bring into my soul With just a single smile. You've given me so much in life So much I hold so dear Patience, love and understanding Has grown throughout the years. You're my one and only valentine My heart is oh so true Today, tomorrow and forever more All my love I send to you. I count my blessings everyday And although you are only nine Give your mum a big hug and kiss Say you'll be my valentine. Love forever more, Mummy.xxxxxxx
Alison Law, 36
Loved, restored yet lonely
Loved, restored yet lonely, I have been told to wait for you, By you yourself my love, you’ve said we will make it through, I now believe in you, and what you have said to really be true, So this love now comes down to patience, and I know you'll wait for me too, You have said that I'm your world, these words I know you mean, That no one can change your feelings, down your face your tears stream, Your sadness touches me, your feelings I do feel, And all because of this, I now know your love is real, Distance is apparent, yet our closeness cannot be broken, You may be miles away, yet my arms will always be open, Do you see how much you mean, have I entered your scarred heart, Well it is now time to realise, as this is just the start, The start of a true love, a chance meeting months ago, The beauty of this time, only me and you could know, We have come so far since then, growing deeper by the day, Ignoring what they've said, we let our love lead the way, I hope these words I write to you, will now make you see, That no matter how long it takes, that you will be with me, I will tell you this again, that you will always be a part, Of the man and life in me, and my once broke but mended heart, To think just days ago, I thought that you I had lost, But again fate took over, and our paths again did cross, I may not have seen you in person, but that does not change a thing, Because tonight I have spoken to you, from my pain you have taken the sting, It is now 2.53 in the morning, so it is now time to enter my dreams, To close my eyes to sleep, and to think of you it seems, So I will bring this poem to an end, with you firmly in my thoughts, Thank you for choosing me, and now bringing back my hopes, Goodnight my angel, my eyes are now closing, I will go to sleep and know, I will hear you in the morning. I love you and I always will xxxx
Simon Gardner
Ode to my love?
Will you be mine to have and to hold, have you the courage to be so bold. Give me a sign that I may know, of a new love that may well grow. Don't be shy and ask me around, or you'll not know what you may have found. I long to hold you in my arms, to kiss and caress and share your charms. Will you be mine?
Jeff Sims, 45
I have forgotten how you kiss
Alone, I chance to reminisce Upon our non-connubial bliss And love, I have to tell you this; I have forgotten how you kiss. Believe this not an artifice To lure you from more grave business But something truly is amiss; I have forgotten how you kiss. Although your body I do miss (the central heating is remiss) It is your oral orifice That most concerns me: how you kiss. I am as lost as Atlantis, Bereft as shipless Onassis; Grant me one brief armistice, Let me remember how you kiss. I gaze into the precipice of unconsoled wretchedness (I have had offers, generous But none remind me how you kiss). Beloved, be not pitiless, I know we argue, know I dis- -Respect your little ways but please, Don't tease with your mischievousness: but come and show me how you kiss.
Kavyasiddhi Mulvey
I'm looking for love, not for a tree, But to "grow your love"? Well, the idea appealed to me! So I clicked on the site that promises to be ethical and green - I was not disappointed for although times may be lean, A gift of a tree that will bloom and bloom Can help conserve the planet and banish gloom. But what of love? Well, my heart did soar To get a tree delivered2mydoor. Overcome with passion as I unwrapped the jute, Here was a concept that deserves to take root. Love and flowers will be spread over ravine and crag, Once I order online my wildflower seed gift bag! Yes, love has grown amongst the birds and bees... All because I ordered my trees!
Claire Ruderman
My James
My James is tall, dark and handsome, My James, I wouldn't betray for a ransom, My James is my hero and loves me, though I'm not a Size Zero, My James, along with shopping, is my heart and soul, So this email I'll send, because James is my best friend, I'll love my James for all of my life, So, tell me, what's your James like?
Kelly Evans
My one and only love
My one and only love makes me flutter like a dove I was amazed at first sight I finally knew everything would be alright That special feeling you give to me A love thats true and filled with glee As everyday that passes by I love you more and more sometimes I cry But only tears of joy come true I cannot wait to say "I DO" I can't wait for that day it'll be great Happy Valentines Day my love and soulmate You make me the happiest man in the world I'm so glad you are my babygirl I hope you like this poem i'm new to this My One and only love FOREVER YOU I KISS
Robert Swailes
Tell Her
My heart cannot fathom the joy, Nor can it grip the strength from my thought. It is something I must converse, To bring me to this final ploy and short. A means to an end yet a start of something new. It's what's inside this ever expecting heart, That holds its one love so true. It will never break or fall, And cannot be changed. But have me forever knowing, Your the greatest thing I've ever gained.
Matthew Kemp
Perfect Valentine
Awoken by kisses Then breakfast in bed. A shower together Maybe cuddles (nuff said). A lunch in the country. A bottle of wine. A small gift of diamonds Or gold would be fine. A hairdo and facial To fill in the day Or even a makeover - He's gonna pay! And then, when I'm ready No rushing, oh no, He'll escort me to dinner And maybe a show. A bottle of champers To round off the night. Now don't that sound perfect? But likely? Yeah - right!
Wendy Barbe
Souls in the storm
I look up at the sky and I can see a thunderbolt, it reminds me of a neon light. A sudden storm surrounds me, I start to crumble - until you are near. I can feel your soul next to mine, I can almost touch it. Floods swell around us, endless rain falls over us. I can hear is the thunder, storm ripping, endless rain, lightening stiking. Then we fall...silence. The storm covers others now, every rain drop was a thought for you. I then get drenched by your gental touch, and through my eyes and I see you with a talent, a talent to make me smile.
Naomi Hefter, 25
I am and always shall be your friend
A broken heart always seemed like a metaphor I never thought for one moment it could be real But I felt the pain inside When I told you how I feel. I've put our friendship at risk And for that I can only apologise But I’ve wanted us to be so much more And I can no longer where the disguise Of just being a friend, Of standing idly by While I watch you fall for someone else You seem me smile for you but don't hear me cry. I thought you knew or at least hoped you'd see Something special about us that meant there could be a you and me.
Gareth Jenkins
My poem
Standing in the sunlight Goldness in her hair Butterflies surround her Strangers stop and stare Flowers bloom and smile Caught under her spell Captivated by the girl Who calls me her angel
Richard Deavall
Distraction
He moves his arm and I can't help but stare At the lightly tanned skin, the dusting of hair The shape of his hand, long fingers and thumbs If I look any longer I'm bound to succumb To the raging desire to jump up and touch Those strong arms around me; I want it so much I glance at his face and he knows I am staring Lips curve at the sides for the smile he is wearing Those blue eyes meet mine and I feel such a rush My heart beats so fast and my chest starts to flush He's my husband and how he delights in the knowledge That I can’t focus with him beside me at College
Jennifer Deavall, 25
There is something about you
There is something about your smile, That makes mine run a mile. There is something about your tone, This never makes me feel alone. There is something about the way you treat me, That brings out the best person in me. There is something about the sexual tension, This makes me feel so wanted i thought i`d mention. There is something about the way you turn me on, That makes my pain and stress all gone. There is something that makes me love you, This makes me hope you feel the same way too. There is something that feels so right about us being together, Inwhich i know we will make passion and love last forever. There is something that made us meet that day, and for that, i am thankful in everyway.
Jemma Ozanne
I will find you
For my wife Stephanie
Through driving snow and hurricanes Through stormy blackened skies Through ups and downs, with smiles or frowns With dry or crying eyes Through oceans, lakes or rivers Over gentle brooks and streams I'll hear your whisper calling softly On the wind or in my dreams But in countryside, or city Over land or sea or air I will find you, and remind you That I love you and I care
Chris Tisdall, 39
The Vow
This poem is dedicated to my wife Mrs Ferial Law
How can I show you the way that I feel, That you'll be convinced of its power? How can I show you, how can I reveal To your eyes, just the thoughts that are waiting to flower. How can you hear what my heart keeps on saying? Those thoughts, I'm unable to hide Can you not see that I'm only obeying The voices that tell me, in you to confide. We both know the answer, it's plain we've been hooked By a love-that we know, can't decline, And I know that you love me, because you've just looked With your heart and you've seen what I'm saying with mine. So this is the story of love most compelling, A love that will last for all time And that I vow to you on this Valentine's Day That my love will not alter, not fade, never die!
Bonar Law, 64
Burning Dreams - St. Valentine's day
Love is just a burning dream, I sleep with every night, And wake with every morning. Love is like a plane in flight, An eagle in the sky, That swoops without a warning. So come with me, To far off places that the eyes can't see, Where we can be together. So come with me, Where purple flowers grow brightly in the sea, Of time we call forever...
Howard Ruderman
An apology
I feel your warming ray Filling me with purest light; I have nothing left to say. My eyes are hung all about with grey Until you flood them: through the night I feel your warming ray Pulsating about me in a way That makes my dreams seem bright. I have nothing left to say That can make up for all the yesterdays That I have wronged in my blinded sight. I feel your warming ray Even though you have gone away. Even though I try to write, I have nothing left to say To make you come and lay Your body next to mine. Tonight I feel your warming ray And tears will try to stop the decay That will come if you take flight. I will feel your golden ray. I have nothing left to say.
Stephen Campbell, 23
Rose is in bed Violet seems blue But Juglans Regia Means my nuts are for you!
Kate Cole, 41
It takes two...
I would kiss you deep in your garden; I would kiss you under your stairs; I would kiss you wide At your narrow bedside When your head is bent low for your prayers; I would kiss your pale hair, drifted And soft as a baby’s breath; I would kiss your eyes Open wide with surprise - I would kiss you in life, in death; I would kiss you warm in the sunshine, Or cool in the shade of a tree: Of my kissing's no lack - But, again, you draw back And, as ever - you kiss not me.
Angela Arratoon, 62
The Amorous Cockroach
The sun shines bright from your window, Lighting leaves on the tree by your door, It even shines bright With dazzling light Through the cracks in the boards of your floor; That sun is your own dear radiance In your eyes, in your lips, in your smile, And for one small sight Of that innermost light I would creep over many a mile; So let me in swift through your window; Past the leaves of the tree by your door - Or by way of respite, At the deep dead of night, I shall crawl through the cracks in your floor...
Angela Arratoon, 62
I know you don't believe in Valentine's Day, And claim that it's just a racket, You say that proving you love me, Doesn't require you to spend a packet, I agree, I suppose, to a certain extent, The price of cards is almost a crime, And you show you love me every day, Buying little gifts all the time, So as usual, I won't buy a card, Saying "Each Year I Love You More", But instead, with a little luck, I'll announce it through Tree2Door, You should have kept your mouth shut, And let me buy a private soppy treat, 'Cos now the whole wide world will know, You make my life complete!
Beverley Andrews
Recognition
If we had met In some unclouded previous existence, Some other country, age, Manner of being, inside or out of time, It would have been the same: This dawning light of shared, enjoyed coincidence, Names, dates of birth, Joy of surprise at paralleled experience Hard-holding, firm and fast Far beyond everyday’s smaller, familiar frame: Though fret with fear that each time might be our last - We, like twin trees, inhabit our landscape we need not name.
Angela Arratoon, 62
Theme and variations
I hold your face fast on my mobile; Your letter's stashed deep in my room; I searched long and hard for a Christmas card But hell - we were only in June; Then seeking out New Year bargains Your birthday gift stood out a mile: Though not in the sale, I paid on the nail - Next July I shall savour your smile; What loving is this? it just happens: So much of the stuff that I do, Whatever my stunt, (upside-down, back-to-front,) Ends up in the name of just - you, Who's implied that you’d rather not know this, That you’d rather I just let you be - So I'll mail it away, for St Valentine's Day: Just some birdsong, hid high in a tree.
Angela Arratoon, 62
To Matt - my Husband & Valentine! The time's getting on nearing the end of the day as I write you this poem I mean what I say Your my wonderful husband the man who I love who's smile and affection is more than enough As we spend our first Valentine's as husband and wife I want to say thank you for my happy life I know that I'm loved and as I look at you I remember the day when we both said I do You're thoughtful and caring you're honest and true my Mr. Perfect that's certainly you So Husband & Valentine I just want to say remember I love you more every day!
Lisa Twigg, 36
Valentine
Tomorrow I'll wake up, another day with you, another day to celebrate. Pink cards can't summarise an emotion any better than I can define this warmth. Unspoken words are difficult to evoke when everything has been said by someone else. Nothing is superfluous, every day is an anniversary, every day is a memory. I just love you.
Sarah Woolsey, 21
Oak trees are green and. Well all trees are green - sometimes brown too, Or mottled with gold kissing skies that are blue, Roses have thorns whilst violets won't last, Spring whimsies with flimsies are flings of the past, Red leaves or no leaves - limbs thick with flowers, Beneath blankets of blossoms we can call each other 'ours'. Some trees are one colour though some are another, What really matters? Is that we love each other.
Ms Rebecca Louise Mulvaney, 17
You are the sun in my day, the wind in my sky, the waves in my ocean, and the beat in my heart
Mrs E Cella, 39
First meeting
We were ever then? Those first moments when We met. Your hand upon the door. My first sight of you As you stared around the bar. By one glimpse let, But sensing more. Your everything So good and new. Your very being And all you are. Your how. All was never then, But now.
Robin E J Chater, 59
What does missing you mean?
You're not here. You are elsewhere, But you are 'not being' here. There seems to be a physical effect of your non-presence. I have loose ends, lots of them. Things that were begun with purpose seem temporarily purposeless, I am missing you. I just want to put my head in my hands. I can't care enough about things without being able to share that care. It must be because I am missing you. I am sighing too much, I am eating too much, I am drinking too much, I am thinking too little, but I'm not doing Anything that seems to be important. That's how I'm missing you this Valentine's Day.
Alaric Pugh, 50
You are my love life And I am happy to be your wife You make my knees go weak Everytime you speak You are my friend And make my heart bend You are the only one Under the sun You are my treasure And give me great pleasure You are the one for me And I am happy to be in the sunshine With you as my Valentine
Mercia Van Tonder
My Relationship at school
To the one I love, The way I love you Has as a beat in side Your loads of fun for me Your family to Girls are jealous But that doesn't bother Me or you Been together for Three months First valentines Together cant Wait hope you Feel the same Way to Most of your friends Are mine i only Have one friend That's a girl My old friends had Made us argue And we both Hate them to
Taylor Davey, 9
My Invisible valentine
A valentine I cannot feel neither touch A valentine yet, missed so much A valentine I cannot hug or kiss A valentine so far from my lips In my heart, this valentine I miss She is meant to arrive the 14th of February Just like last year but that is all a wonderful memory A valentine I cannot see Dear valentine, how can this be? Are you here or are you there My dear valentine you could be anywhere This poem is for you But their is no place I know of to send it to Valentine if you really exist Show yourself; come out from the heavy mist Take 1 rose today, take one for tomorrow Take my last one before you disappear into the empty hollow A poem for you, read it once more line by line I have to go but remember I'll be by the bench where the storm ends and the light start to shine Ps I love you, my invisible valentine
Ahmed K. Badi, 23
Sight of light
I want you to be my delight to be my very guiding light with every word i say I want you to stay and forget yesterday I know you might bless my sense of sight you give me courage unlike any ot the others so I hope one night you will be my one delight and the guiding light that will give me might and be the goal on which i set my sight
Isaac Swanson
To my Valentine
So sturdy Earthed as a huge tree A trunk to embrace Accommodates gently My joy and grief. Arms that comfort Without intruding, Encourage humour Not condemning Harvest relief. Maker of songs Connect through your centres The seasons. Sing Of sap rise and fall Through life-support systems. Describe delicate growth Flowering, pruning. Celebrate the rhythmic Cosmic re-cycles But song-maker keep Like firm tree roots Those fundamental feet
Margaret Bradshaw, 65 (feels about 44)
For the one I love
Does the light shine in your eyes As it does in mine when you are around? Are the days full of joy and beauty As they are when I spend the time with you? You are the magic of the moment The sweet dreams of my endless joy In the long darkness of the night time You are the beacon to guide me home When l am afraid and lonely Your presence heals my shaking soul The sweetness of your compassion Fills my world with light and love The rising colours of the morning sun The full shining glory of the moon The glorious radiance of a forming rainbow All these and more, remind me of you You are the candle in my window The story of loves never ending joy The reason for my believing That love really does conquer all For this love I thank you my joy The times we spend together magnify Our shared warmth and wealth of passion To you my angel of love I dedicate this my love May our moments last beyond eternity.
Colin Skilton
Dedicated to my beloved, Mr. Leon Clarke
Do you know how much I love you? I love you so much, that I'd live on nothing if it meant that I could spend every minute of every day with you. I love you so much, that our problems seem petty when I'm wrapped up in your arms. I love you so much, that I'd simply die for you. You're the only person I will ever love; could ever love. My heart makes love bubbles for you, it is yours and no one elses and it will always be yours. You are my ultimate sweetheart. I am so proud and lucky to have you. I could never get sick of loving you. Everything I do, it is for you. I'll love you until I die. You are my ultimate soul-mate, you complete me. You have helped me to better myself and to love myself. I keep our memories in a special place in my heart, and when I'm sad, I visit that place; then I am no longer sad. All the love in the world wouldn't make up for the love I have for you, My Boo.
Emma Harper
Tree me up Free me up Let me lean on Something stronger Than a pole In a bus or Moving escalator rubber. Shade my heart Let me feel the Warmth of bark, Not the scorch of sun. Let me run my Fingers deep Along your lines And know the shape of time.
Gabriella Alexander
Passion killer
Don't wear that old nylon nightie It’s really not turning me on When I turn round in bed The sparks hit my head And bingo my passion is gone. Wear the one I bought you last Valentines The one with the ribbons and ties Oh please wear the one that I bought you It might help my passion to rise. Now you can't blame a bloke for complaining I put up with curlers and socks But I must draw the line Cos I'm not feeling fine Lying next to a nightie that shocks.
Trudy Simpson
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